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The distance may be great.
And all we have is the phone.
We may stay up extremely late,
But we know our fate is full known.

Because I love you and you love me.
I know we'll be together again soon.
Being with you is all I think about, baby.
And fate still rings that beautiful tune.

I get butterflies in my stomach,
Just at the mere thought of you.
You know, you left me awestruck?
But texting or talking will have to make-do.

And I'll also keep dreaming of us,
Until we can see each other again.
I'll always love you forever, I promise.
Distance may be great, but it can't win.
eh... No song title this time. Sorry loves.

Just my interpretation of those long-distance relationships. I hope it sounds like what someone might think when in this kind of relationship.

Poem © Me.
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
I just can't relate it. You described so good what it means to be in a long distance relationship ♡♡
Beautiful
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DancingWithGlitter Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This definitely sums it up. Ive been in a long distance relationship, and to be very blunt and honest.. they are the best kind. You know that the person loves you for you, and you have to trust each other and support each other more. 

I love my boyfriend and I trust him completely with my ENTIRE life. I just have this... this gut feeling.. instinct deep inside my heart that we will be together forever.:happybounce: Love in the Air 
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hdsmoot Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Photographer
this is a beautiful interpretation
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Effamay Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Really felt this. Loved the last line in particular.
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BittyPKC Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Exactly how it is.
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PixxelProductions Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, this really is a motivation to me with my girlfriend living 300 miles from me. Anyway, great work, i like this one! Thanks.
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
It sums up exactly what I'm feeing right now in my long distance relationship....
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808islandghurl Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
beautyful words and so very true ..... thank you ...
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BareLuvr Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
so i'm new to the long distance thing, this is exactly how it is. thanks so much for sharing
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operadivablock Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Student Writer
the sweetest poem I've ever read! Love it! Thank you for this!
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