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The distance may be great.
And all we have is the phone.
We may stay up extremely late,
But we know our fate is full known.

Because I love you and you love me.
I know we'll be together again soon.
Being with you is all I think about, baby.
And fate still rings that beautiful tune.

I get butterflies in my stomach,
Just at the mere thought of you.
You know, you left me awestruck?
But texting or talking will have to make-do.

And I'll also keep dreaming of us,
Until we can see each other again.
I'll always love you forever, I promise.
Distance may be great, but it can't win.
eh... No song title this time. Sorry loves.

Just my interpretation of those long-distance relationships. I hope it sounds like what someone might think when in this kind of relationship.

Poem © Me.
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Writer
I just can't relate it. You described so good what it means to be in a long distance relationship ♡♡
Beautiful
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DancingWithGlitter Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This definitely sums it up. Ive been in a long distance relationship, and to be very blunt and honest.. they are the best kind. You know that the person loves you for you, and you have to trust each other and support each other more. 

I love my boyfriend and I trust him completely with my ENTIRE life. I just have this... this gut feeling.. instinct deep inside my heart that we will be together forever.:happybounce: Love in the Air 
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hdsmoot Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Photographer
this is a beautiful interpretation
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Effamay Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Really felt this. Loved the last line in particular.
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BittyPKC Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Exactly how it is.
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PixxelProductions Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, this really is a motivation to me with my girlfriend living 300 miles from me. Anyway, great work, i like this one! Thanks.
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Feonyx512 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
It sums up exactly what I'm feeing right now in my long distance relationship....
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808islandghurl Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
beautyful words and so very true ..... thank you ...
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BareLuvr Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
so i'm new to the long distance thing, this is exactly how it is. thanks so much for sharing
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operadivablock Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Student Writer
the sweetest poem I've ever read! Love it! Thank you for this!
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Invisichick Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
Since we've been together (a little over a year), my boyfriend and I have seen each other a total of 5 times. Since we've known each other (2 yrs), we've seen each other 7 times. It sucks when you meet a great person at something such as a summer camp, like we did, only to find out they live in another part of the state. Now I'm at college in a different state while he stayed in his area. It's been rough, I've only seen him once since school started in the fall. I finally saw him today for the first time in 6 months. Happiest I've been in a very long time.

Your poem is extremely accurate of a long distance relationship. Love the last line :D
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xshadow-dancerx Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
Its exactly how you NEED to think when your in a long distance relationship.
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lucky2becool Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
omg i love this so much me and my boyfriend are in one right now, i can't wait to see him and be in his arms
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
Awwww... I hope you both have a wonderful relationship!
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lucky2becool Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, i can totally relate to your poem.....good job on it :penguin:
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Caleighrg Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWW!~ :iconomgsocuteplz:
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner May 9, 2010
:3
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Psycotik Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
I can relate so very well to this poem. Thank you for writing it.. It is so very well thought out. Thank you. x
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2010
Thank you so much. I'm glad others can relate to this poem so much.
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hornet750 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
this is really well written, and i can totally relate to it
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Thanks. :3
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allya4sab Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
yes this is very true, well done
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
Thanks. :3
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danrad1 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2009
im in a long distance relationship and love him more than i thought i ever could ^^ and i know he loves me cuz we both cried when we had to say goodbye
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009
Awwwwwwwwww. . . That's really bittersweet.

I'm sorry you guys had to separate. I know the feeling.
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danrad1 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009
i think the saddest/sweetest part was we'd only been in physical contact with eachother for 6 hours. (we met online and dated for 2 months before i flew out to see him)
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009
D: Wow.
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danrad1 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009
i know ^^ i loves him
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
:D
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jolieffect Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
amazing. Reminds me of every single night I've had for the past 5 months.
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Hadassah-Kiyoshi Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
Thanks.
And I'm glad a lot of people can relate to my poem. :3
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vzarrell Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008
This is so true.... it almost made me cry..... im going to miss my baby
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DiamondGirlFL Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008   Writer
excellent piece....and i understand it completely.
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Blanzeflor Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
If you are interested, :icondegrees-of-love: is having a contest with the theme Love Over Distance and your poem fits it perfectly.

And, yes, I can relate to the butterflies aspect of a long distance love.
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