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The distance may be great.
And all we have is the phone.
We may stay up extremely late,
But we know our fate is full known.

Because I love you and you love me.
I know we'll be together again soon.
Being with you is all I think about, baby.
And fate still rings that beautiful tune.

I get butterflies in my stomach,
Just at the mere thought of you.
You know, you left me awestruck?
But texting or talking will have to make-do.

And I'll also keep dreaming of us,
Until we can see each other again.
I'll always love you forever, I promise.
Distance may be great, but it can't win.
:iconhadassah-kiyoshi:
eh... No song title this time. Sorry loves.

Just my interpretation of those long-distance relationships. I hope it sounds like what someone might think when in this kind of relationship.

Poem © Me.
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Mood: Wow! ~hdsmoot Jun 8, 2013  New member  Photographer
this is a beautiful interpretation
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:iconeffamay:
Really felt this. Loved the last line in particular.
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:iconbittypkc:
Exactly how it is.
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:iconpixxelproductions:
Mood: Sadness ~PixxelProductions Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, this really is a motivation to me with my girlfriend living 300 miles from me. Anyway, great work, i like this one! Thanks.
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:iconfeonyx512:
It sums up exactly what I'm feeing right now in my long distance relationship....
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:icon808islandghurl:
beautyful words and so very true ..... thank you ...
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:iconbareluvr:
so i'm new to the long distance thing, this is exactly how it is. thanks so much for sharing
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~operadivablock Jun 27, 2011  Student Writer
the sweetest poem I've ever read! Love it! Thank you for this!
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:iconinvisichick:
Since we've been together (a little over a year), my boyfriend and I have seen each other a total of 5 times. Since we've known each other (2 yrs), we've seen each other 7 times. It sucks when you meet a great person at something such as a summer camp, like we did, only to find out they live in another part of the state. Now I'm at college in a different state while he stayed in his area. It's been rough, I've only seen him once since school started in the fall. I finally saw him today for the first time in 6 months. Happiest I've been in a very long time.

Your poem is extremely accurate of a long distance relationship. Love the last line :D
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:iconxshadow-dancerx:
Its exactly how you NEED to think when your in a long distance relationship.
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